Similes and Metaphors

Metaphors and Similes are used in figurative language to compare and contrast different objects or ideas. They are formed when words are put together so skilfully they conjure up pictures in your minds.
When using a metaphor the poet speaks of an object or idea as if it were another object. In "The Highwayman" Alfred Noyes says, "The wind was a torrent of darkness and the Moon was a ghostly galleon"

Silver, by Kieran, Dampier Primary School,

Silver is the colour of stars in the night bright sky

It makes me feel like I’m tired

Silver is the colour of a baby koala on its mother’s back

I think it is the reflection from the moon

Silver is the jingle of charms tinkling together

It’s an athlete’s suit when they’re running

Silver is the colour of the night bright sky coming to an end.

Snails

Sliding steadily across the path

Like boats slowly sailing across the ocean.

Snakes

Slithering in the desert

Like worms wriggling in the sun.

By CAMPBELL’S CREEK PS

When using a simile the poet compares one thing with another. Words such as "like" and "as" are used to make comparison; for example "as round as the moon." It is more important that children know what is being compared in a poem, than the difference between a metaphor and a simile. It is also important that their comparisons are fresh and new and help them to see ideas or objects in a different way.